the phoenix
hello, phoenix.
There were many names they called you. Prodigy, cheater, phoenix. On the mat, however, none of that mattered. All you had to do was strike.
Once, your parents had been the darlings of the sporting world. Both Olympic gold medallists in the art of Taekwondo, they were revered as the pride of their nation, the golden couple.
That is, until word of the doping scandal came out. Since then the now disgraced golden couple dipped out of the spotlight, deciding a more domestic life was suited to them. Never in their wildest dreams did they expect their kid to want to join the sport who's name they had tarnished.
At 25 years old, you had been fighting since you could remember. Now, you have the chance to restore your family name to its former glory: as the masters of Taekwondo.
Begin your rise, phoenix, and show them what you are made of.
- Choose your sporting persona. Will you be the arrogant young prodigy or the humble underdog?
- An equal balance between sports and slice of life.
- Romance one of 4 RO's, each with their own paths and personalities.
- See what the public think of you and your actions on social media in a responsive system.
- Attempt to balance training, relationships and your health as you get busier and busier.
- It is possible to lose matches and be eliminated later on. Your choices will matter if you want to win.
- Fight, obviously.
The Coach - Alex Chrimele - gender selectable
Even when other coaches refused to work with your tarnished name, they gambled on you. Kind, lighthearted and just slightly out of reach, it's easy to imagine how good of a partner they'd be. Maybe too easy.
The Reporter - Jamie Franco - he/him, male
You could call him your biggest fan, with the way he follows you around. It's a strange game of cat and mouse between you two - he pry's, you pull back. Could it ever be deeper than just this constant back and forth?
The Influencer - Wendy Morgan - she/they, female
Sports isn't just about the game anymore. Your team thought it would be good if you became associated with a new national icon. Perhaps you could grow beyond your PR friendship with Wendy, even beyond just a friendship.
The Local - Min Dhakal - they/them, non binary
Sometimes, you forget that not everybody lives and breathes taekwondo like you do. Min has absolutely 0 interest in the world you're embroiled in, something which inexplicably draws you to them like a moth to a light.
??? - Secret RO
You get one chance to trigger their romance in chapter one. They don't like you - you're competition for the medias attention. Is it worth the effort to try and get them to change their mind? This route is more angsty and toxic than the others - be warned.
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Status | In development |
Platforms | HTML5 |
Rating | Rated 4.7 out of 5 stars (41 total ratings) |
Author | sahara |
Genre | Interactive Fiction, Sports |
Made with | Twine |
Tags | Character Customization, Dating Sim, Romance, Slice Of Life, Story Rich, Text based |
Average session | A few hours |
Languages | English |
Links | Blog |
Development log
- bug fix update for chapter oneNov 13, 2023
- chapter one release - 12/11/23Nov 12, 2023
- happy birthday jamie!Oct 15, 2023
- twine demo launch - 29/08/23Aug 29, 2023
Comments
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Encountered a bug; if you choose to not have a persona in the prologue (just being yourself), then choose the kind and humble response, the kind/rude stat bar will break.
Edit: As far as I can tell, this then results in the character being perceived as 100% rude (there is a TopOfIt comment said that my character's arrogance was apparently hot, despite avoiding rude and arrogant choices where possible)
Edit2: Also, apparently, there's no way to restart mid-game? Which seems like a potential oversight.
seconded this ! desperately needs a restart button, i play most ifs a bunch of times to get all the options :/
sigh Idk if i'm mixing up blogs but on tumblr I believe the author has unfortunately dropped the game. So none of that will be coming unless Sahara decides to come back to it one day ๐ฎโ๐จ๐ญ They have a lot going on if I remember correctly.
Just checked the tumblr, and yeah, it's gone. It's unfortunate, but if they need to prioritise themselves, then I'd rather they do that over anything else.
WHAT HAPPENED TO JAMIE NO
haha he's back in chapter two!! have a lot up my sleeve for jamiemancers to make up for his lack of appearance in chapter one :)
the moment i saw the secret ro, and that the route was angsty and toxic, i was like
yes, that one
it'll be a fun one to write for sure :]
omgg i've played the choicescript demo but i didn't know you have a twine demo!! love it <3
glad you found your way over here!!! <3
Holy fuck this is amazing
ahhh thank you so much!!
This is becoming one of my absolute fav IFs i never knew I'd love sports IFs so much.. I'm the last person that could ever be mistaken for an athlete lmao but the writing is so bomb it's insane. Stop making so many damn appealing ROs tho you are making my MC a flirty hoe ๐๐ ๐คฃโฅ๏ธ
HAHA this is the absolute highest praise i could get!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it, and i fear your mc will only struggle more the further in we get hehe
Hello, I got this error when choosing the option to miss my mom or not.
Also got this error.
thanks for letting me know! both these two should be fixed if you play through again :]
Alright, I'll play through again.
Fixed.
I kept getting errors during the interview, I'm not sure what happened.
Got these errors when speaking to Wendy.
The option to buy Wendy an almond crossiant is a link that opens a new page to a file.
think the wendy ones should be good now, afraid the interviews still giving me a slight headache so may need slightly longer on that!! thanks so much for your help <3
You're welcome. I enjoyed the new update and can't wait to see what comes next.
i adore the update (and the story in general) you have so much potential! i love how the concept is unique and the characters are well made already. my only request is you donโt stress yourself out. itโs normal to feel overwhelmed and i want you to know its totally okay if you ever need breaks! especially in the if community, as readers tend to pressure the authors.
thank you so much!!! your words genuinely mean the world to me, i'll definitely try my best to pace myself ๐ซถ๐ซถ
as for the errors, if you could send them over that'd be amazing! i'll definitely have to look into getting beta testers in the future ๐ฅฒ
For a moment I forgot this was a demo๐ญ๐ญ Literally know already that Jamie(Happy late birthday btw??๐ญ) and Alex are gonna be the loves of my life lsakjw (And you, author are a patootie here's a cookie<33๐ช)
haha thank you for reading + enjoying!! i'll cherish the cookie <3
i love it already!!! cant wait for future updates aaashagsdjksgdaks!!!!!
thank you so much!! means the world to me that you enjoyed it, can't wait to get chapter one done and out :D
love the demo, but I got another bug. If I choose to have a crush on alex and on the moment we meet jamie(without choosing any options) it immediately sets me to having a crush on jamie too even if I never choose to.
looked through the code and it's just a visual thing, messed up with the variables in the stat page :P will fix it w the next update!! (edit: just to clarify it doesn't affect the gameplay in any way!!)
Personality stats are kinda weird
i've been looking into this and can't seem to be able to replicate this error, do you mind telling me what browser you're using and at what point in the prologue does it appear like this? :)
I get the same error with the [number NaN] with the outgoing stat when meeting with jamie and I choose 'Resist the urge to bolt' option
Edit: Replayed it and got another NaN error, but with the formal casual stat when I choose 'Plaster on a large grin...' when jamie asks us whats our goal
Edit2: I also realize that when I choose ''I'm too good for this'' it rises the humble stat and the "everyone needs to review the basics" choice rises the arrogant stat
Edit3: same Number NaN error with the outgoing stat when choosing "can't believe you forgot about me" with alex
these should all be fixed now! thanks so much for letting me know :)
Most of them is OK now . One more small bug, after "Pretend to look around. "Who're you talking to?"
When it comes to page design... I have a suggestion to add "back to game" button on the profile page. The only way out is "GO BACK" which is quite annoying because you have to go back through all the clicks on the profile page to get back to the game (I hope I explained it well ๐ค)
omg i already love this story so much and i'm really excited to see it on twine ~ thanks so much for all your hard work!
thank you so much for the sweet words, means a lot !! <33